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Re: Señor correcto y no correcto de control de armas: foto de la bandera -- TEEBONE Post Reply Top of thread Forum

Posted by: TEEBONE ®

09/02/2019, 22:12:19

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I recognize this writer for obvious reasons, and I've had enough. S/he needs some, ah, constructive criticism.

So I offered some. [Hee-hee!]


I know this may come off as me believing I carry a “Grammar Police” badge, but here goes anyway.

I recognize this author’s style, and the content is unfailingly spot-on.

But please, if you’re reading this, know that you choke your otherwise brilliant writing with an avalanche of superfluous commas that disrupt the flow of reading it.

Ironically, the Second Amendment has but one comma, yet SOMEONE added two that create mischief.

Was that YOU? (Just kidding.)

Anyway, please take this in the congenial intention that it was offered.


Democrats wouldn't buy a clue if it was government subsidized.

Modified by TEEBONE at Mon, Sep 02, 2019, 22:27:55

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